Fleeting Time Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

Fleeting Time

Rating: 5.0


Smell the flower of life
So soft, so sweet and so fragrant
And its colours
So beautiful, so vivid and so sublime.
And as we smell
And smile
And take in its fragrance
To the heart,
They droop
And their petals
Wither away
Beyond thehorizons
Of time.

Friday, February 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifespan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on 07.02.2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2018

A pragmatic write.. lovely expression... thanks for sharing...10

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T.Rajesh 09 February 2018

Thanks Kumarmani Mahakul ji for your valuable assessment. Of late I was busy with the publication of a children book viz. 'Tales of Wit and wisdom ' and so my contribution was sporadic.. But now that phase of work is over, I hopefully would be more active. For your kind information, my book is available on Amazon and Flipkart.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2018

If life becomes soft like flower this is great and this should carry fragrance of wisdom like blooming of flower. An amazing and interesting poem is beautifully and philosophically presented...10

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