Flame In Your Eyes Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Flame In Your Eyes

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J-anuary ninth breaks,
E-arly Monday morning;
A-fter the lonely twilight,
N-ew dawn is in the offing.

M-isty Sunday is gone
A-s the sun starts to ascend;
R-ain falling from the sky
I-s beginning to
E-nd.

L-ight above the horizon
I-s preparing to rise;
T-ake time to fuel the fire
A-nd the flame in your eyes.

Flame In Your Eyes
Sunday, January 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 19 April 2018

The last stanza is exceptional writing: L-ight above the horizon I-s preparing to rise; T-ake time to fuel the fire A-nd the flame in your eyes.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 April 2018

Thanks a lot, dear Carl for the remarkable comment🙏🙏🙏

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Chinedu Dike 15 January 2017

Beautiful and insightful with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 January 2017

Thanks, Chinedu.... Your comment means so much to me.....

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