Fix Me Poem by Angel of Death

Fix Me

Rating: 4.8


I'm so hurt
My heart is broken
My soul damaged
Please come and fix me

I'm all alone
No one wants to be with me
No one hears what I say
Please come and fix me

I'm so jaded
Because of being everyones scapegoat
Because of all those complaints
Please come and fix me

I'm so tired
Of living
Without you

If you don't come to fix me
I will be broken
Forever

So PLEASE
Fix me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lycko Chizo 02 August 2009

Your writing portrays real hurt feelings.. And It's affects your reader well! You must read my poem 'Those Eyes' and 'Sinking In Sadness' cause it kinda similar. Ill give it ten.

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Daryl Young 15 April 2009

The passion and the almost screaming. The emptyness of it all. So very cool, beautiful flow. Good job, please feel free to read and comment on my works as well. thank you Rabbit

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