Five Fingered Aids Poem by merna ibrahim

Five Fingered Aids

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I am an important thing in your body.
I help you to study.
I make you able to write.
I make you able to hold the kite.

I consist of ten fingers
Every finger ends with a nail.
By me, blind people can read by the way of Braille.

My function is to hold things.
I hold the microphone which you use it to sing.

I am a valuable thing to you.
You use me every minute, Yes you do! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

beautiful poem merna..excellent expression..

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HaZeM PaKKaR 09 August 2009

i am using my 10 fingers to type these words: '' Bravo! ! it's so funny & very well written poem ''.. i raise my 2 hands to give you claps.. please, NEVER stop writing! !

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Afzal Shauq 09 August 2009

My function is to hold things. I hold the microphone ehich you use it to sing. I am a valuable thing to you. You use me every minute, Yes you do! ! well done, the idea is really heartfelt one, what a swetly done it..appreciate your talent and your thoughful poems and this one is one of them.. the verses are inter linked very well.. I liked it and you know I always like your poetry in your small age, means you are much talented poet..pray for your long and happy life..10/10

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Omar Ibrahim 09 August 2009

nice title: D: ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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~ Jon London ~ 09 August 2009

Great piece my lovely...expressed in your unique style.....keep them coming....a very gifted poetess

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2010

I am an important thing in your body. I help you to study. I make you able to write. I make you a......... ........................ EVERY FINGER HAS IMPORTANT ROLE TO PLAY...LOVELY PIECE OF WRITING........10 READ MINE.. COME OUT

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 November 2009

a creative poem Merna! you used a bright poetic way to define FINGERS/ Thanks For Sharing/

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Afzal Shauq 12 October 2009

consist of ten fingers Evey finger ends with a nail. By me.blind people can read by the way of Braille. good merna.. thsi is true what ou said here in this sweet and rich poem.. reality is what you tried to strennthened in the example of ten fingures of hands. when they join each other the difficult works have been done easily... good idea.. and rich poem with meaningful message..liked it..well done 10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 15 August 2009

nice imagination Merna...and truthful too...good piece...10

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Doha Ewiess 12 August 2009

simply nice....... :)

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