First Attempt At Writing 'Tetractys' Poem by indira babbellapati

First Attempt At Writing 'Tetractys'

Rating: 4.5


Moon
Descends
To my door
And grins at me
To restore my smiles and wipe my tears

Smell
Jasmine
Each evening
Fill with fragrance
May the summer perfume linger through night


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 21 May 2013

As poets we have to be very creative and you have been with this good poem.

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Shahzia Batool 19 May 2013

Creative attempt, and meaningful too, all about beats, balance in a measured manner...a thoughtful attempt! ! !

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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