indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

First Attempt At Writing 'Tetractys' - Poem by indira babbellapati

To my door
And grins at me
To restore my smiles and wipe my tears

Each evening
Fill with fragrance
May the summer perfume linger through night


Comments about First Attempt At Writing 'Tetractys' by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 10,863 Points David Wood (5/21/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    As poets we have to be very creative and you have been with this good poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (5/19/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    Creative attempt, and meaningful too, all about beats, balance in a measured manner...a thoughtful attempt! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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