Fireflies Of Laughter Poem by Rehan Hyder

Fireflies Of Laughter

Rating: 5.0


chasing after the fireflies
of fading laughter
ears bleed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 15 February 2008

Rehan, good work! Use the present tense & delet articles? chasing after the fireflies of fading laughter ears bleed

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Michael Pruchnicki 15 February 2008

Rehan, good work! Use the present tense & delet articles? chasing after the fireflies of fading laughter ears bleed

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Emancipation Planz 07 March 2008

Wha' did ya say? .... I need a band-aid

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Waqas Naeem 08 March 2008

wow...that is just amazing...for me, it signifies the desire to be happy and not alone....beautiful imagery...

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 20 April 2008

incredible.............

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lesbian 26 June 2020

what even is this? ? ? ?

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Naé Tyler 01 September 2008

the last line is unexpected, I love how it contrasts the mood of the other two lines. grandness.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 April 2008

Loved this..great write all the very best Jon

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Francesca Martin 28 April 2008

Ah, brilliant! I love this! Short with a big punch

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Karen Delta 28 April 2008

I know you’re intrigued I can see it in your eye You’re trying to figure out How to catch this firefly :)

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