Fire, Graceful Dancer Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Fire, Graceful Dancer

Rating: 5.0


Fire, the way you dance fluidly,
Has a charm tender to my eyes
That I sit so calm to remain
With interest much as I rest
Earnestly my palms on my laps,
In front of you doing your stuff.
Interesting it is to know
How intriguing you are it is
As a striking, graceful dancer.
Even wondrously as you move,
So well you do it as you sway
With incredible curves quickened.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent caption 'Fire, Graceful Dancer' Great idea of 'fluidity' of fire. Indeed a great dancer = Prima Donna Wow! Ten. Regards, dr. skati. 14.08.09

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Mimi Fakhira 12 July 2009

Nicely penned. I love the imagery.10.

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