Finish It Off Tonight Poem by Wes Thompson

Finish It Off Tonight

Rating: 5.0


you can convince yourself
of just about anything
if you're not sure what you want
not quite sure who you've been
as there's much to be fond
when there's not much at all
but in my head she is loved
as the coast loves a gull
it's far too easy to lie
if for a moment she smiles
I promised forever to be
there for just a while

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 02 July 2008

You can tell if someone has promise just by one blinding line... in this it has to be 'as a coast loves a gull'. Superb. You're really good Wes. Enjoyed. HG: -) xx

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Marvin Brato 02 July 2008

Its quite explicit poem, full of passion for someone you car e! A 10.

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Jessica Golden 02 July 2008

This is a very beautiful poem, Wes. Thank you for sharing. -Jessica Golden

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