Filing Bankruptcy Poem by Susan Lacovara

Filing Bankruptcy



Your eyes, like diamonds
I could never afford

Your lips, the rarest of wine
For my beer pocket's pennies

Your slumber, rich and far off distant
As I am left to work the graveyard shift

Your hands, have held foreign sands
While mine have dug deep in stagnant soil

Your words, placed on silver platters
Served up with warm relish

Your face, chiseled like a museum sculpture
Mine beneath a mud clay mask

Your breath, worthy and worldly devine
As I struggle with asthmatic intentions

Like the Little Match Girl trudging along
Looking into storefront windows of warmth

What seems like a treasure, not easily obtained
Better be mine, if filing bankruptcy....

Broke

Wednesday, January 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(01/28/15) For those who struggle with self worth, insecurities and loss
of belief....wage on. PEACE(s) tend to fall into place, and greater wealth returns.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 07 December 2017

Filing for bankruptcy is a daunting process. In America good credit is more important than money. This is a very nice poem.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 07 December 2017

Filing for bankruptcy is a daunting process. In America good credit is more important than money. This is a very nice poem.

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Anthony Burkett 01 February 2017

Why is it that we always struggle with our secret fear of unworthiness? ... a self-chastising for wants that we believe to be unattainable? ... the heart knows best... and it is always worthy of our greatest desires... a bittersweet morsel your pen has delivered here... I sigh for the time I have wasted in self doubt...

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Raymond Farrell 14 June 2015

This is serious stuff here, the contrasts are very poignant indeed. I have been on both sides of these matters in my life. But I am glad I started out poor, that I think was a blessing because it helped me appreciate it when I finally broke even, and I already knew money does not equal happiness.

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