Fell Deed Poem by Baden Ronie

Fell Deed

Rating: 4.8


a fell deed this night,
in the silent dark,
a dagger flashes,
and blood flows.

a fell deed this night,
done in candlelight,
the knife does fall,
as the victim tumbles.

a fell deed this night,
only a slight,
to the killer,
who doth run.

a fell deed this night,
running he be,
through the slight light,
a corner he turns.

a fell deed this night,
a bang a shot,
a gun doth drop,
a killer killed.

a fell deed this night,
a new killer laughs,
an evil sound.
a fell deed this night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 29 November 2008

I like the flow of this. I like the way you have used repititition. I give this one a 10. Regards Ron

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