Feel Of Pain From Prematured Loss Poem by Amitava Sur
Feel Of Pain From Prematured Loss
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Life may be so tasteless
And trashed -
I could never feel it before,
Nor could I realize even
Before you had left.
It is inextinguishable
Like a fire of husk,
It can't be traced
But goes on burning itself
And Continues giving pain...
So blistering and painful
Is this prematured loss,
It continues it's spitefulness
Very cruelly up to one's end.
With senses and logic,
Perhaps only a little may be felt.
Like a luxury cruise,
Merrily floating....
Suddenly being sunk in a swirl! !
As Titanic did sink! !
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Amitava (23.11.2014)
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Perhaps this is your double century. I must like to congratulate you. Your loss is really great which has no supplement. Love of your surrounding and all poets and PH friends would make it ease. Pray the Almighty to give you more tolerance to overcome the present solitude. Thanking you for sharing your pains through your painful write with us.
Like a luxury cruise....suddenly sunk... beautiful lines. A sudden loss not only is tragic but difficult to bear too.
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4/26/2024 11:28:54 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A loss is more painful if it is prematured, An impressive poem...........10