Fear Poem by Robert Eclipse

Fear

Rating: 5.0


Spreads through the body
Like blood in water
And a chill goes through your
Spine
Your skin goes white as
Leprosy
And your body frozen
With fright
Your hands shake yet
Your legs daren't
Move
Stuck in one place like a
Picture on a wall
Your heart beats
Faster faster every
Second racing like
A horse
Your body becomes cold
Cold as the depths of
The arctic ice
As you're captivated
By fears inescapable might.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 20 December 2012

That's really strong, powerful writing. The images are excellently chosen too; blood through wateras the 1st especially, it shows the reader where the poem is heading. Great stuff-M

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Kaila George 03 July 2012

Funny I have a peom kinda like that....cant remember if its under the same name or not....but anyways...you discribed what I use to feel....you paint it so real...nice work.

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