Fastball Poem by Susan Lacovara

Fastball

Rating: 4.5


Up to bat, again,
While the bleacher-filled crowd looks on
They know my stats
My 'swing for the fences' stance
How I eye each pitch
Dig in deep, feet planted
Shoulders squared...

The hits and misses logged
On a scorecard, for all to see
The opponent, hurling
From his mound
The roar of the fans
Deafening, in their collective support
Of wanting me to get on base

They know my uniformed number
Proudly worn with my name stitched
Across my bruised back
They clap, they urge me on
I take the pitch, a heavy throw
And swing with might
From deep within my aging muscles
Unwilling to be 'caught looking'
And horribly strike out
In the bottom of the ninth

Saturday, February 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: trying
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(02/07/15) ...Just another chance to 'Cross Home Plate'. In an arena of well wishers...Playing fair, to find my PEACE.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 18 February 2015

evry base is first base and it always wants to hurt us first. good un.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 February 2015

Poem Fastball is very nicely envisioned. Words choice is excellent. Many thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 February 2015

PoemFastball is very nicely envisioned.Words choice is excellent. Many thanks for sharing.

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