Famous Last Words Poem by Trenton Davis
Famous Last Words
There You Are,
Laying Next To Me,
Choking,
On Your Blood,
You Try To Speak,
But I Stop You With A Kiss,
'Goodbye' I Whisper,
But She's Already Gone,
My Words Are Useless,
Her Body,
Lays Lifeless,
I Stare Into Her Eyes,
My Last Look,
As i walk away forever...
i like it the guy seems very uh.. not easily emotinally efected by tragic events lol and it's not very specific so it kinda leaves you with a mystery LOVE IT
Honestly, I liked the poem, but the last line made it seem... I don't know... a little too creepy.
The poems go thru on here so fast, and I nearly missed this one. I love the way it is written, and the subtle twist at the end which changes the whole status of the poem from sympathy to hate. Clever Write Steve
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:14:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
trenton, you should qualify for a poem compition..ure poems are good enough to qualify and i would know...im a qualifyer pls ure an emo lyk me and emos always havea good chance...or addd me if u have facebook