Falling Apart Poem by Jon Evans

Falling Apart



My life ruined by past
my life isnt going to last
pain like a knife in my heart
my life is falling apart
lost my eagerness and hope
this life i cannot cope

please someone save me
please dont let it be
my life will soon be ended
as i cant seem to get it mended

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iveta Petrova 23 December 2008

a couple of tears formed when i read this its amazing well done

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Twilight Whispers 20 January 2008

I think the title makes sense It sums up your feelings in two words It makes sense :) Good work, really heart felt [ Tw ]

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