Fall Poem by David Darbyshire

Fall

Rating: 3.8


on a very narrow, thin ledge
sitting up high on a wall
wishing no big gust of wind come along
causing me to Fall

I am worried
because on one side
is a thick hedge
on the other, nothing to cushion my Fall

It's fifty fifty
from which way the wind blows
one little push........
who would I call?

But the day was still
and the view was nice
and as a matter of fact
I felt quite Tall

So I better get down now
and call it a day
cause if I had fell
I would feel ever so small

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 17 June 2006

To me this sounds like life itself. On the edge, just go ahead one more gust of trouble and crash to the ground. But we all see things differently. Great read! Patricia

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Duncan Wyllie 16 June 2006

Dear David You look so much better on the ground, come on in where its warmer Love Duncan x

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Dan Tharp 16 June 2006

Yes... for heaven's sake come down from there! ... hehehe dan

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