Facing Winter Poem by David Wood

Facing Winter

Rating: 5.0


The silky afternoon sun
Bathed the river Tawe
In silver streaks.
From tree lined banks
Fading leaves turned brown,
Gave up and fell
Like soldiers going over the top.
Climbing up cast iron trunks
Crept ivy,
Choking their hosts
Alder and sycamore,
It didn't care which,
Weeping willow,
And white willow,
Lining the bank fared better.
Survival of the fittest
Prevailing over God's plan.
The beauty of nature
Raw, ugly, brutal.
Far removed from
Manicured country parks.
Late autumn,
Preparing for winter
And survival.

Wednesday, November 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It seems I have to leave an explanation, rivers in poems means all life, trees people, number of trees number of races, falling leaves life and death, ivy creeping all the things that are imposed upon us in society that choke us. That it is a survival of the fittest, wild nature ordinary people trying to survive over the rich manicured 1% who have all the wealth. It's not just a dumb nature poem folks.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Wonderful imagery. Marvellous expression. Thanks for sharing an amusing poem. - - - - 10

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Kelly Kurt 25 November 2015

Yes, welcome back. Marvelous poem, David. (Did you mean IVY?)

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David Wood 25 November 2015

Well spotted Kelly.

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

Awesome imagery, welcome back after a long gap, missed your poems....10++++ The silky afternoon sun Bathed the river Tawe In silver streaks. From tree lined banks....Superb Mr. Wood

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David Wood 25 November 2015

Thank you Mohammed, I've been busy writing lyrics to songs and a booklet of poems for people who have lost a loved one.

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