Explanation For Bed Wetting Poem by Chuck Audette

Explanation For Bed Wetting

Rating: 5.0


It seems
the weather-filled rain
has affected my sleep
my river of dreams
was never this deep

my bed is a boat
the floor never drains
crossing the moat
the oars give me pains

my current situation
I think I am hating
my bed is all wet
and for morning I'm wading

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 24 March 2006

lol..what a dream Charles! hehe.. This was a neat little poem!

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Barry Van Allen 18 April 2007

Chuck, SO, there is NO possibility that there is a leak in the roof, - - - right? - - - or that you can blame it on a water-bed leak? - - - or a supposed friend 'dunked' your hand while you were snoring? O.K.! - - - I give up! (I tried!) Grab your S.C.U.B.A. gear, and head to bed! B.V.A.

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Someone Else 14 April 2007

I like the idea but don't understand weather-filled rain... rain-filled weather? yes- but, that's minor. Perhaps the dreams are recurrent from many years before when first you heard romantic wetting bells, or was that Pavlovian? Nice humorous write when I get past the hurdles of misunderstanding.

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Anna Russell 26 March 2006

Worth the wait Mr A. Ironic effect of this poem is that when people read it, they'll laugh so hard... Hugs Anna xxx

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Esther Leclerc 25 March 2006

From Poetry in Motion to this - very nice! I have to echo Linda's words, below. Go, boy, go (on posting, that is) ! ! ! Est : ]

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Scarlett Treat 25 March 2006

Hey, Chuckles: What was that Billy Joel song way back - River of Dreams, I think. Chuck, you are so funny but well expressed at the same time. I enjoy your off-the-wall ideas. Scarlett

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