Everytime Im Around You Poem by nathan hawk

Everytime Im Around You

Rating: 5.0


Blood flowin, heart racing
Finding myself confused
I start a pacing
Not knowing what to do

When Im with you
Nothing is wrong
Away from you
I just want to sing a sad song

The pain i feel
When your not around
I dont think that it will heal
Unless I hear your sound

Then I start a pacing
Not knowing what to do
My blood starts flowing and hearts starts racing
Everytime Im around you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 July 2011

A very impressive and well penned and also poignant poem full of imagery and fine texture! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your great talent! Love and Peace for always! RDV from NYC...

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♥ nikki t ♫ 23 April 2010

aww this is a cute poem! i like it!

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Makayla Straight 29 January 2010

All I can say is WOW

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Aurora banneck <3 03 December 2009

i know how this feels. it is an outstanding poem. keep writing

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nathan hawk

petersburg west virginia
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