Eternity? Poem by Louie Levy

Eternity?



Can we really see,
how small are we?

Why do we think we are
the same, from near and far?

We can not ever find the
end to it all, not ever could we see

Round and around -
Circles and wheels

No start to finish
No end, no beginning

Small is big -
from where we see

Empty spaces -
within circles of time

'The Universe We Are...
Yours and Mine'
.
1989

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 28 September 2009

I fully agree with what you have written here. There is no end or beginning, each instance holds all time.

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To Ms Abha Sharma Thank you for your comment. Please see that I agree, as my poetic words are read without fact or controversy. Eternity, distance, time and size are all relative to the mysteries of our Universe. Do you mean Astronomers or philosophers? Quite a different source. All are theoretical and many entrepreneurs have only opinions Let's leave it to Albert Einstein who has been wisely quoted. 'Imagination is More important Than Knowledge' ..louie

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Abha Sharma 27 April 2008

the eternity or infinity cannot be measured, the philosophers have experienced this globe from a distance and found man sometimes as Lilliputs or as Giants… the beginning or end of life cannot be traced…the end to nothingness is also a mystery… a thought provoking subject written with elegance and experience.

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Aaron Combs 03 February 2008

Also, it losea a littly bit of rhyme in the middle.. if you wanted to be consistent... also could you please comment or critique my new poems please thanks?

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Aaron Combs 03 February 2008

Great thoughts.. keep writing...

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