merna ibrahim


Eternal sea


Can you imagine the beauty of sea at sunrise and sunset?
When the golden sun shines and smiles to you.
When the sky looks orange and releases you
In this time, you feel relaxed...and you feel you are in utopia.

According to me, what makes me happy
filled up with glee
to look and talk to this endless and eternal sea

In the other side, we have to thank its creator'ALLAH'

Submitted: Saturday, January 03, 2009
Edited: Saturday, March 21, 2009

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  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/3/2010 2:52:00 PM)

    Wonderful imagery, well penned.; D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,677 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/29/2009 6:18:00 PM)

    According to me, what makes me happy
    filled up with glee
    to look and talk to this endless and eternal sea.................we should always thank allah for his creation and chanceforus to see everything.. sonice it is...10

    read mine o, lord, , prayer....humble submission (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justin Unanue (11/7/2009 2:15:00 PM)

    I am an atheist. So to lay all my cards out on the table I did not neccessarily agree with the last line. However the rest of it, the beauty of sunset and sunrise at sea. That was universal. And that, not any religious connotations or denotations for that matter, is what you should be judged on. And quite highly I might add.8/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (11/7/2009 12:28:00 PM)

    beholding Nature and saying Thanks ALLAH/
    the landscape still stick in my Mind, a Perfect imagery... that's the BEAUTY OF THE LORD.
    an Oceanic 10
    Thanks For Sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tobias Gray (11/5/2009 10:34:00 AM)

    so very beautiful! 10+! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Shiddiqi (9/16/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (9/15/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    It is true, Merna, to thank GOD for the beauties of the earth, especially the ones at the sea. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/26/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    Good thanksgiving poem, Merna...we must thank the Almighty for every richness around us...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (5/10/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    Can you imagine the beauty of sea at sunrise and sunset?
    When the golden sun shines and smiles to you.
    When the sky looks orange and releases you
    In this time, you feel relaxed...and you feel you are in utopia.

    what a great piece is this of your sweet work..love it and really you are treu to say... appreciate your work and talent and hope our ties of words sharing will never stop (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (4/28/2009 2:44:00 PM)

    Eternal beauty and power of the sea perfectly expressed in your poem.Thank you.
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (4/25/2009 8:49:00 AM)

    deep in thoughts as the sea itself/ lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (4/3/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    It seems eternal and attracting.... yes
    and thanx to Allah is very true praising for the features of His creations
    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/15/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    Yes Merna, sea is endless and eternal...
    '' Had ocean been my confidant
    I would have given it all my depths'.......Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,479 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/6/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    Very beautiful Merna.Keep writing. (Report) Reply

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