Eternal Feelings Poem by Kenny Mantinelli

Eternal Feelings

Rating: 5.0


There's this girl I know,
She says I'm the new light,
Little does she know,
She's the one that's bright,
The one girl that shows,
The meaning of right.

She takes me far away,
To a place I knew not,
To a place where I can say,
'Everything I want, I've got, '
Let's just go today,
To this place that I've sought.

When perfection is mentioned,
She's my first thought,
No others for me,
She's the whole lot,
Completely flaw-free,
Not even a spot.

No one agrees,
That we could feel this way,
But we can both see,
We're here to stay,
No time to flee,
Everything's going to be okay.

I promise you,
You're my one and only,
And we can be together soon,
We'll no longer be lonely,
We can wake up at noon,
And know neither of us are phony.

'Cause when it comes to perfection,
You are the meaning,
In my life's infections,
You are the cleaning,
And when I see our reflection,
We have eternal feelings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roman Petrov 03 August 2009

A great love poem! ! 10/10. could you please read my love poem as well: 'Shine Through Your Warm Lips' and give criticism? And an another poem 'Good Night'. Thanks!

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Kenny Mantinelli

Kenny Mantinelli

Fountain Valley, California
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