Endless Light Poem by Bonnie Collins

Endless Light

Rating: 4.5


Blowing in the wind the sail
was full force and heading
away never to return

Endlessly the lighthouse of my
soul kept warning you

Decades have passed still
the light shines endlessly.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

32 Words, packed with power-driven resplendence & simile...Succinctly eloquent, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Duncan Wyllie 26 April 2008

For a moment there.....>>>..... Was I really there>>....? This is brilliant! REALLY BRILLIANT! I recognise quality now Love duncan X

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Kesav Easwaran 05 May 2009

Stunning imagery...metaphorical and symbolic...thanks Bonnie...10

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Robert Sheridan 21 September 2008

Bonnie, Delight with the feeling. Like a precious moment, your words create magical terrain here. So moving, so flowing, and with beautiful inner passion. Such a delightfully written piece! Take care, Robert

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James B. Earley 02 May 2008

A delightful poem, passionately executed!

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Alison Cassidy 30 April 2008

The power of love to transcend abandonment. A inspiring poem - eloquent and without frills. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Andrew Blakemore 29 April 2008

I really do admire your work Bonnie, this poem is so beautiful. Love, Andrew x

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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