Emptiness Poem by Crimson Soul

Emptiness



I Feel So Hollow...
The Crevices Of Sanity Overflow My Mind
In The Shadows Of What Were,
But Will Never Be...
The Tendrils Of Thought,
Ensnare My Brain,
As I Start To Wonder,
Am I Insane?
I Look At The Sky, Its All But Dark,
I Sleep With The Stars, Watching Me Rest,
My Troubled Soul Knows No Sanctity,
As The Pillars Of Life
Come Crumbling In Bits;
The Pieces So Hollow,
Killing With Each Hit:
Crying In Tears Aloud,
THey Hold So Much, Rung UnLoud.
The Sky Turns A Shade Of Crimson,
Violent And Red;
My Soul Is Leaving Me,
Through The Cracks I Have Made,
Each Broken Bone, Shattered Remnants Of Memory,
And Discharged Thoughts, Fade Away...
As I Become What I Most Feared...
Me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkangel Flyfree 23 October 2012

This poem is really good and i can actually feel your words pour out of you! I definitely know what its like to feel so empty and hollow inside and not being able to be the person you know you to be! Awesome write and well expressed! Im really enjoying your work!

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