Empowered Mind Poem by Alyssa ArtsLover

Empowered Mind

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'Thinking
-But not feeling, my mind is subsided me
from my thoughts flowing
The need of speaking
-No words left-im still searching, searching
for those ones aren't hurting
Seeing
-Yet not believing, the visible seems so cheating
Hearing
-Still ignoring, searching for the
inner silence that is comforting
Floating
-Yet sinking, feebly to the deep within my own mourning
Breathing
-Yet drowning, I only hear my heart's blunt beating
Resting
-Yet don't know where Im laying; Am I existing? '

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: empowerment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 15 December 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A lovely poem shairing.i enjoy this poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2017

Seeing -Yet not believing, the visible seems so cheating Hearing -Still ignoring, searching for the inner silence that is comforting.......yes a search of the inner silence is the need of the times......... very thoughtful poem.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Alyssa Artslover 15 February 2017

Thank you for reading my poems and for your comments!

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