Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR

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' Emeralds And Black Diamonds... - Poem by Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR

Lie down lass, lie down, in sage green meadows
Your blouse flouncing open, in the teasing breeze
The meadows, feel so cotton, this time of season
Come lay beside me lass and sense the softness

Open field, sweet honeysuckle....arouses my yen
Shamrock blades in sparkle by the mid-noon sun
No clouds abide our scape of choice, to pleasure
Again I ask you lass......come lay you down by me

Come close my love...these hungry emerald eyes
Beg to stare into your warm, black diamond eyes
Take my hand in bond, lov' and let me assure you
That Emeralds and diamonds....never fade away

Comments about ' Emeralds And Black Diamonds... by Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR

  • Veteran Poet - 1,698 Points Elena Sandu (4/20/2015 5:55:00 PM)

    Who could resist the beauty of this poem? My eyes keeps sparkling from mirroring those emeralds and black diamonds! Thank you for sharing a poem that brought warmth and light to my cold and rainy morning! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,697 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/31/2015 10:50:00 PM)

    A Major ''Thank You'' to my most welcome visitors today...The students, Lit Professors, and Department of Language Arts at Bronx Community College of New York...Your support is most greatly appreciated. Do come again, and when you do, do stop off and read the many other writers and Poets on this site who, like me, are
    looking to please and educate the minds of tomorrows world of contemporary literature, . Thanks Again B.C.C.!

    Frank J. Ryan, Jr.- IPM (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,608 Points Rajesh Thankappan (3/4/2015 9:01:00 AM)

    Ah diamond and emeralds shall never fade away! Beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,841 Points Godfrey Morris (2/25/2015 9:27:00 PM)

    Beautiful like the ending. Great write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,973 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (2/25/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Congratulations. Its amazing and nice poem to see as poem of the day. Very nicely composed each line. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,292 Points Kevin Patrick (2/25/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    subtle beautiful words to parch the dried cynic, and sweep the reader in romanticism, there is nothing more treasurable then an emerald or a diamond that which fits the beholders soul, no diamond can ever compare to the beauty of once loving embrace. Fantastic stuff Mr. Ryan, your an impressionist in language, great stuff (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,884 Points Patricia Grantham (2/25/2015 1:00:00 PM)

    This is really a glittering and passionate write. Diamonds and emeralds are
    beautiful stones. Nice details. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/25/2015 7:08:00 AM)

    Oh! those glittering eyes.... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,679 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (2/25/2015 6:48:00 AM)

    Love has been improvised with dignity to expand its natural phenomena. Love never ends with setting sun rather flame tolerates our intention to touch the soil by heart. Love demands consent, love demands sanction and ultimately love recognise oneself to be the torch-bearer by its various tails and toils....... So intense the poem with its poetic strict diction......great....great...great. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,101 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/23/2015 2:18:00 AM)

    I understand this poem as a message of love for a society having both, emeralds and black diamonds. It's a powerful write...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 554 Points James Fitzpatrick (1/8/2015 8:14:00 PM)

    Very Irish, very American Irish very much in tune with a lining for a culture as much as the woman. Very good.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Brian Jani (6/20/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    Lovely lovely writing here Mr frank you are truly an acrobat with the pen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barb Mcavaney (8/7/2012 3:54:00 PM)

    A beautiful write about love. cleverly worded and brilliant (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Scheherazade Renaissance (7/16/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Had to come back to this again. juat saw it on the top 500 poem list.this should be ranked much higher! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Scheherazade Renaissance (7/13/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    This is an absolutely gorgeous piece of poetry. One of the best I have read since coming here (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Saul Ranton (6/18/2012 2:52:00 PM)

    awesome, awesome and absolutely awesome is all i can say! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Winchester (10/14/2009 3:22:00 AM)

    Diamonds, You my 'Friend' have the flawless Eyes to See.
    I hope you get your way, the next time you lie beside the Maid.
    Blink not, I fear she may Escape.Sad to have to find another Maid Again.
    Kind Regards Philip. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vaibhav Pandey (8/26/2009 12:52:00 PM)

    what a beautiful love poem sir.....your style is unmatchable! ! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie fleur de lys (8/26/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    Language so sensuous. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (6/14/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    a good pastoral poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 4, 2015

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