Green hills
embroidered
on the ripples
winding around the castle
of the little mermaid
toward the upstream
of the loving stream
Ah, God's handiwork, splendid!
Nice poem. You captured both the image and the feeling. Well done.
Hi Cigeng, Wonderful poem on nature- the wonders of nature. But, more than your poem, the pic! ! . Who would not turn a poet, watching such a scenic beauty! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! Exquisitely captured. Of course, He is the better poet! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! We are all worthless before him. But your poem is no less! Green hills embroidered on the ripples winding around the castle of the little mermaid The embroidery of green hills we can see in the pic. But a castle with the ripples of green gills winding around it and the little mermaid in the castle. A metaphor of par excellence... A fairy tale opening up.. Now I take a second look at the pic and see, sure, the castle...... And the li'l mermaid sleeping inside the castle is none other than Cigeng! ! A sprightly 10+++++ toward the upstream of the loving stream Ah, God's handiwork, splendid!
What a nice remark on my little work! New spring gives us new vigor. In return for this, we're penning for the beauty of nature here. Thanks for your warmth and beautiful sharing. Much appreciated.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really beautiful poem, nature is the greatest piece of embroidery ever created.
Thanks you liked the little poem!