Edge Of Forgiveness Poem by Zibele Mrasi

Edge Of Forgiveness



The silence speak of powerful words yet with no meaning

twisting and turning the picture that was yet in the mind with no warning

heaven I'm not but angel I'm
As I'm alive I'm not close to tell not of my people stories

slavery-death-freedom is short story of what runs in your blood
listen to these words and let I tell you about you

This was build into us
pain of it still live in the back of our memories

the scars remain in us
sounds of cries-bullets-names
they happen to be the default dream to us

yet the name FREEDOM is the light that shine over this darkness

far we have came
in this road it shall be a sin to blame
I'm not here to teach you about your own doing

but to remind you of your kindness in your own heart

that you have pushed yourself to the EDGE of FORGIVENESS

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Soul 10 February 2012

I Really Like The Word Choice And Feel Of This Poem. I Suggest You Change it Up so your Syllables line up though; it would make it infinitely better.

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Lenin Meitei Thingujam 28 January 2012

love d theme...keep it up

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