Dying Inside Poem by Kirsty Richards

Dying Inside



Dying inside
I hide behind closed doors
It's a chore to even breathe
I dont believe
that any day that I've prayed
the lord has heard my pleas

Dying inside
A life full of regret and broken dreams
It seems so easy to just give up
Live up
to what people expect
and accept that I'm nothing

Dying inside
Along with my pride
I let fate lead the way
But I paid for sins that weren't mine
And then got abandoned
And landed right back
in the dark I tried leaving behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

Dying inside is almost spiritual death. I think it's not easy to just give up and live up to what people expect. Nice poem, Kirsty.

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Dislocated Heart 01 February 2009

I've experienced this in the past.... well-written.. Keep writing

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Hope Wallin 01 February 2009

This poem is so exactly how I'm feeling right now. It's really good! Keep writing! ! !

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