Dreamy Eyes See The Broken Promises πŸ’” Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Dreamy Eyes See The Broken Promises πŸ’”

Rating: 5.0


On the love soaked pillow of night
Where the silence merged with the darkness
And the moon slipped through the clouds
The unfathomable love from your lips
Enshrouded me to deep slumber
Covering my senses with thick, silky hairs
Hand resting on the bare chest
And body bathing in moon beams
Thus, intimacy resonates the aroma of warmness
In the valley of our body and inhale sweetness
From the navel of earth when the sun rises
My dreamy eyes see the broken promises
Hanging on the leaf of our past memories.

Sunday, September 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2020

A wonderfully written poem. Truly impressive ...5stars++

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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2020

Wo love and loss so masterfully depicted in this gem of a piece.

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Sebastian G 20 September 2020

Written on silken sheet with pearly words This poem is joy to read with every word Carefully selected.

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Poetic Sky 20 September 2020

Lovely poem. It has everything from love to broken promises. Fantastic.

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Varsha M 22 September 2020

A beautiful melancholy expression.

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Anjandev Roy 21 September 2020

the aroma of warmness..........magnificent write.........thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 September 2020

Past memories! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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T Rajan Evol 20 September 2020

To a fantastic love poem a unexpected twist made it more so interesting.

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Varsha M 20 September 2020

This is very splendid and full of emotions flowing like gush of water.

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