Dreams With Open Eyes Poem by parth gwari

Dreams With Open Eyes

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As I imagine, my heart beats to its beat. every little things i see my emotions sails in a sea.With a open eyes there is a dream as smooth as a cream.

Humpty-Dumpty walk i take my friends says lets take a break.
You are too old for that childish walk, lets take elder's crawl.

When i felt like a wind fate landed me into the ring and now battling with time 12 rounds have passed and i took breath they said there is a threat. I saw another war around, so I thought to slow down to be the breeze and take all the time's hit. And use my wit to take that win.

When I get what all mine, I'll be the wind to move around nine to nine. And then I'll find the one and take where I can be air.

But all these are just dreams which i have seen with open eyes. Ah! there is a battle tomorrow and I got no time.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written before the day of last 12th Board Exam.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 April 2016

But all these are just dreams which i have seen with open eyes. Ah! there is a battle tomorrow and I got no time. a very fine poem. lot of imagination somehow bound together with the realities also. well phrased. thank you very much. tony

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