Down Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Down

Rating: 4.5


Why should she suffer like this? !
Why?
Down,
One year with her illness;
And, she finally gave up.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Having illness is so sad definitely. But we hope her for easy recovery. Nicely drafted and shared....10

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Sad ending.....Nicely written.

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