Door's Poem by rebecca soriano

Door's

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The entrance to my heart is through a door,
It is open and closed to love you once more.
But once it is closed forever and tight i will not cry for you tonight.
But still i would know i had feelings for you, the feeling i made but the feelings we both knew would soon come to fade.
We had good times and we had bad times, we had sad times, and we had glad times.
But the times i will never forget are the times you made me feel so close to your heart.
When you said you loved me and we'd never be apart.

-For Heartbreakers

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pied Piper Berry 29 August 2008

This poem is well expressed. I enjoyed it! !

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Bharati Nayak 11 August 2017

We had good times and we had bad times, we had sad times, and we had glad times. But the times i will never forget are the times you made me feel so close to your heart. When you said you loved me and we'd never be apart. - - - - - - - Feeling 'loved' is the most precious feelings among others.In a relationship there may be ups and downs, and may be separation and heart breaks.But we want to hold in our memory the most beautiful feelings of life.Spoken from heart, a lovely poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

'But the times i will never forget are the times you made me feel so close to your heart. When you said you loved me and we'd never be apart.' Soft and lovely poem.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 May 2009

heartfelt, thanks for sharing

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Ency Bearis 26 September 2008

nice narrative poem with good deliverance...well written...keep on writing... Ency Bearis

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Manonton Dalan 17 September 2008

reminds me of my old poems. very beautiful and so innocently true.md

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