Don't Poem by Rebecca Springsteen

Don't

Rating: 5.0


Don't sit there and weep.
I don't sit in the ground asleep.
I already did my blow,
so don't put your face in the snow.
Stop staring at those grains,
I'm not in there. Stop watching the rain,
I don't live there anymore. I no longer go hush,
when the moon is out. I'm not the rush,
of sunlight. I'm not the bright star,
I don't shine at night. Stop your crying,
I didn't die.
You knew me in the past.
I don't live there anymore.
So to you, I don't exist anymore.
That girl did die, a long time ago.

Tuesday, March 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: future,pastime
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryson Dsouza 01 March 2016

NIce in rhythm... Just like a story a young girl laying in the snow & enjoying the moment.. conveying dont weep..i have taken my blow breath. The emotion of liveliness expressed... Wonderful visualization.. keep writing..10

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Barry Middleton 01 March 2016

Is that blow as in cocaine? If not you might consider did my show. Either way it's a good poem.

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Rebecca Springsteen 01 March 2016

No, I honestly didn't think of it that way. Well then............................ Anyway, thanks for reading Barry! -Rebecca :)

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