Dna Poem by Rehan Hyder

Dna

Rating: 5.0


Between father and son
spiritual DNA crosses over
untold stories of war
raise armies in sinews
wisdom of centuries
sneaks into existence
in declamations, declarations or
just mere admission of love

[ Inspired by Hamid Kareem's poem]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emancipation Planz 19 March 2008

Perhaps.. but as I mentioned somewhere else before tonight it may just have something to do with zygotic gene effects... particularly if you are talking war...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

Small and beautiful, a non-typical content is used, interesting. Love to add 10.

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Reshma Ramesh 11 September 2008

thanks for your comments, i have been reading your work.......loved it and this is my fav

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David Desantis 01 May 2008

wow. Congratulations, this is the best poem i've read today. So much natural truth is captured in these so few lines. Our DNA builds us, and makes us who we are. I try and touch on this theme quite a bit, but I dare say you have done it much more succinctly. Great one.10/10

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Subbaraman N V 07 April 2008

'just mere admission of love'- beautiful expression!

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Could explain the George Bush I & II War Strategy....Very Nicely Done, Rehan. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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