Disease Of Your Affection Poem by alexus jones

Disease Of Your Affection

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Don't lie to make me happy
I don't need a tainted charm
Your false feelings
Bring emotional harm

I am afraid of loneliness
Our love no longer true
But can I stand alone
Without leaning on you

Disease of your affection
Penetrating me
Your beauty like a virus
Attacking violently

Not to worry, I'll be fine
I'll make it through the day
But when tomorrow comes
I'll have the courage to walk away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gage Llewellyn 08 November 2012

Hello Alexus, y name is Gage Llewellyn... i have been writing music for a while (not publishing) and i have came across this poem... I would like to know if i could use just a few words from the main part... I have the poem written for my song already and here it is: (there are some parts from your poem) (Verse 1) How do I mend a broken heart. When my whole world has fell apart. How do I start a brand new day, when the one I love has gone away. My mind is filled with fantasies, My eyes possessed by memories. I knew that you wouldn’t stay So now it’s time to fly away… (Chorus) The disease of your affection Is me Your beauty like a virus Attacking constantly I long for your attention, the warmth of your embrace, the yearning in your eyes and the smile upon your face. (Verse 2) My heart knows to love only you And now I ask what did I do. The time we had just flew away Now I wonder what to say. Though I cherish all the time we’ve spent, For you’ll never know how much it meant. And now I bleed internally, As if my heart was ripped from me… (Chorus) (Verse 3) How do I mend a broken heart. When my whole world has fell apart. How do I start a brand new day, when the one I love has gone away. Now I spend each lonely night, Wishing you could hold me tight, (Chorus [repeat as many times as necessary]) End Some parts are from your wonderful Poem... sop if you approve i would like to write that, it would be my best song yet... E-mail me at white_queen_umbrella@live.com or call my cell phone at 360-827-2544.... Thank you so much and it is a beautiful poem!

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Justin Reamer 03 August 2012

This is a very sad poem. It is very good, and I must say that I feel your pain. If this came from the heart, then the poetry is great. Poetry from the heart is the best poetry out there. You did a good job. Keep writing.

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