Sandra Feldman

Discover Me - Poem by Sandra Feldman

Discover me,
In the grains of salt of the sounding Sea,
In the perfumed Rose, that you cannot see,
In the Wind that calls and is always free,
In the love of the nest for the leafy Tree.

Discover me, in all things of the Heart,
Discover me, and only me,
For I am Love, for Eternity.

Comments about Discover Me by Sandra Feldman

  • Gold Star - 20,853 Points Daniel Brick (6/22/2015 8:58:00 PM)

    The key line of this poem is certainly DISCOVER ME IN ALL THINGS OF THE HEART. You could not find a better way of stating clearly and completely the essence of your poetic nature. And I envision as a platform or stage on which is displayed the four images in the first stanza. My favorite is the last one THE LOVE OF THE NEST FOR THE LEAFY TREE. That is so original an image it leaves me breathless, and yet you are acknowledging something commonplace in nature that I for one have not appreciated before. AND the second image IN THE PERFUMED ROSE THAT YOU CANNOT SEE - that's an image that Hafez would love, it captures the image of love and attraction of SUFI poetry (which is really big in my Twin Cities because of Robert Bly's leadership - his translations of Hafez are so wonderful!) . (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/11/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    nice writing Sandra. this poem is put together well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,481 Points Paul Brookes (5/16/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poem Faith love and nature. I see God in your poem Thanks for sharing 10/10 : O) BB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lyn Pendleton (5/9/2013 3:41:00 PM)

    seeing life, and love, so clearly, can be frightening
    I think. I was listening to a Heart song in the kitchen
    this morning, and it gave me goosebumps, and I
    kind of internally scolded myself for caring. very
    lovely and poetic. like it alot. take care (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,957 Points Saint Cynosure (5/5/2013 5:54:00 PM)

    This was a good discovery for me... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, May 20, 2013

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