Dim Light Poem by Ayan Mondal

Dim Light

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Dim Light
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In this silent evening,
I am standing here
with mind empty,
No one is visible except darkness,
Lone winter evening,
Silent music is playing,
Here there in the bush,
The sad song of life,
Only light,
dim and flickering,
Is visible when you wink,
From your room's windowsill.

@ Ayan Mondal: : 13/02/2019 : : 6: 42 PM

Dim Light
Thursday, February 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2019

silent music, the earth and this life

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

pure light lives in this darkness! .........////

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2019

remove words like sad sorrow dark dim etc then you will SEE LIGHT WITHIN ME

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

" Only light, dim and flickering, Is visible when you wink" 🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️ In this sordid world everything is dark and gloomy..only an Enlightened Master can bring back light into our life..great poem ☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️☀️

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

In this silent evening, I am standing here with mind empty, No one is visible except darkness, Fine thought

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

Beautiful poem...and keep in mind the comment of the great poet...The poet poet...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 February 2019

No one is visible.......((((XXXXXXXXexcept darkness,) NOT MATCHING JUST WINK AND SMILE LIKE ME No one is visible except inner BRIGHTNESS THE LAMP OF LIGHT SMILES

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