a voice can be heard
close to a whisper
a prescence can be felt
right in one's lap
even in impersonal spaces
even in cold precincts
a voice can remain unheard
a prescence can be ignored
even in earshot distance
even in closest proximity
20sep2009
09.47hrs
Wisdom pours fast & hard from this Socratic pen-gem, young lady! You continue to be one of the better reads.and talent on this stage, and the above work puts a credible stamp on that assertion of mine! P.S...1 think i caught a type-o...presence(no C) ...No big deal, the only reason i'm so good at catching these human err's is that i'm also an expert at making my own, all the time! lol! ......Excellent Worl, my dear. F j R
Well observed, clearly penned and explained.....great work my friend...Thanks! 10+++
Agreed, indira, then, where does the difference lie? What makes visible, invisible....tangible intangible...... from silence to sound and lots of voices in silence...? ? ?
indeed the difference doesn t lie in distance! the DIFFRENCE can exist in the same Heart and the same Soul! ! ! then distance isn't a criterion of Difference! nice structured thoughts! I liked it
Wise words. I often hear those distant whispers that touch my soul. You are a true poet. Warmest regards, Sandra
this nearness unbridgebale and this silence deafening... reverbrates.....ones soul to shreds and what a life pic u painted prof... endless ceaseless torture.... put in words so well cvheers and ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Absolutely right! It all depends on our stage of mind. Good thoughts though.