Dieties Poem by Amanda Miller

Dieties

Rating: 5.0


The hours I've wasted,
Thinking of You,
Have cast a shadow of doubt,
Over everything I do.

I'm trapped in a box,
filled with betrayal.
All hope has vanished.
I am currently in Hell.

I am fading into yesterday.
Remembering my past.
I'm losing my courage.
I just hope I can last.

I've lost my faith,
In deities and in trust.
My bible is dusty.
And my cross is covered in rust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I love this poem. But please remember that you can always confide in Jesus he is the HOPE of my life. And if you fell like you can not trust any one he will be there for you. And so will I.

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Joseph Cross 07 April 2008

Dark and demented. My kind of poetry

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Original Unknown Girl 01 April 2008

Fabulous rythym to this piece. Love the last stanza especially. HG: -) xx

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