Desperation Poem by Tim Rawson

Desperation



My days are unforgiven
The nights get even worse
I need a change in my path
Feels like my life has been cursed
The feelings that I once felt
Are all but gone again
The slump keeps getting deeper
Its all been one big sin
I can't figure out which way to turn
Or even if I should
Too many voices in my head
Saying if I was you I would
Please help me in this deep dark time
To look ahead and strive
Pull me out of this hole in my life
And keep my soul alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fleur de lys 27 July 2009

You've conveyed the feeling very effectively Tim and succeeded in capturing the angst we have all felt.

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Tim Rawson

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Weirton, West Virginia
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