Desperate Times Poem by Neil Graham Marsden

Desperate Times

Rating: 4.5


I hope when your ego is scraping the ceiling
and your mirrors grow tired of that smile,
you will choke on the guilt trip denying you feeling
and drown in seductive style.

May your mascara run at each important moment
could you possibly lose all your hair,
for your looks are now really so unimportant
with your honesty stripped threadbare.

If ever you fall can I please then trip over
the crumpling heap on the floor,
can I tread on your head till the doctor says'dead'
crush your heart in the nearest door.

My darling your mind is a world full of lying
but guess who was fooled in the end,
the one who is best at the art of deceiving
could never have been my friend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nadine Miller 22 August 2015

Your writing has always been captivating and evokes so many emotions! Good expression of intense emotions. The imagery is very vivid! Thanks for sharing this with me.... Nadine

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Stacey Watts 09 October 2008

Wow this a very heart wrenching poem. It kept me riveted to the end. Great job!

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

good one again............

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