Desert Flower Poem by keith hendrickson

i like this one too but different ending in a way... just an idea so noone will ever know wonder why i never grow other than that i loved it

Very beautifully, and artisticly written. The feel that this piece portrays, almost makes you forget your talking about a desert flower fighting to survive. Same as the feelings we can feel. Once adored, once beautiful. Once cherished and well taken care of. But eventually we all become weeds.

few lines but loaded with meaning and wonderful thoughts

all your poems are a work of art

I really really know how you feel. I'm going through the same thing now. Really great poem...Keep up the good work.

your work is very fluid, full of emotion. i am surprised to find another poet with ideas so close to mine. keep pouring your emotion into your work. and keep working to not let your emotion get the best of you. your poems are your relaease, take the gift you, ve been given and use it to the best aptitude. keep writing your heartfelt desires instead of giving in to them. another impressive write my friend. Jen

excellent poem deep thoughts -10 anjali

Very very good piece i say your poems r way better then mine

very closely look at self actions.........penned beautifully 10+

yet again, you left me saying wow. very great piece of work, from beginning to end. anyone can relate to this one. how many times we have felt this way, because of numerous reasons, are countless. very wonderful. i love it. you are a great writer!