Deprived Poem by nicholas casillas
Deprived
a king without a crown
a man with no goals
a child with no heart
o this is how it goes
this world deprived of love
this world we have is evil and corrupt
like a volcano about to errupt
sitting and pondering
wondering why.
why has this happined?
what can we do?
then a voice replied
Its all up to you! ! ! ! ! !
dont like the caps at the end, think an exclamation mark would be better, i get the point your trying to make, ironicly there somehtign on the box about teenage gang murders..
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4/27/2024 12:14:20 PM # 1.0.0.1119
hey this one is really motivational - and i was reading the person XX's comment, I think it would really emphasize your point if you DID have it in caps, but both ways work. lol, your probably like what? ! ? ! All I'm saying is we know the end is important ;)