Depression! Poem by Becky Ginn

Depression!

Rating: 5.0


A black hole, closes in
Blocking the light, cold within.
A swallowing mass, empty and black
Tears me apart, supermassive attack.
Icy hands rip out my heart
I’m so messed up, i’m torn apart.
I cannot breathe, it’s suffocation
I’m on my own, in isolation.
The darker it gets, the less I see,
I’m trapped, there’s no way out for me.
Behind a smile, in me hide,
No-one knows, i’m dying inside.
Yet I wake each morning and carry on
I will not cry, i must be strong!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 07 June 2006

I've felt this way many times throughout my life. You're not alone in this. I'll say, those days are very far apart now...very rare. Happiness is a wonderful salve for the soul. Very powerful poem Becky. Sincerely, mary

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Saroj Dhiman 29 May 2006

very appropriate words-strong ones used in the precise manner.touching and real. very well done.unbeatable!

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