! ! Demonstration Haiku For Mike Who Asked Poem by Michael Shepherd

! ! Demonstration Haiku For Mike Who Asked



Dusk on autumn brown -
where does this sadness come from?
Freed leaves, dancing home..

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[some of the (too many) self-appointed authorities believe that a haiku should contain a 'surprise' element, or as the Germans say, 'the Aha! experience', plus the usual 5-7-5 syllables and season and time of day identified..]

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Sonny Rainshine 08 January 2009

Superb example of one of my favorite genres.

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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