How do I slip through the defenses that suround you,
How can I get to know you if you never let me through?
How do I get close to someone whos is so intent on keeping me out,
I ask these questions all day long and fear I will never figure them out
I have tried the most dangerous aprach, putting myself in harms way,
And Ive tried pushing harder and harder each passing day.
But when I put myself in harms way, you shot me down where I stood,
And when I pushed harder it didnt do any good
I tried everything I know, to gain an ounce of your trust
The need to come up with more creative plans, is a definate must
Maybe if I try something Ive never tried before
Then another pice of your mind you might let me explore
Why do you need such strong resistance on gaurd in your mind
That is the answer I despertly need to find
Maybe once that mystery is solved
The rest of your defenses will dissolve
But for now I will serch the wall gaurding your mind
The smallest point in the wall that I can breech is what I must find
But for you I give this warning
Theres nothing you can do to get me off the path I am following
Great write very intense in the questioning from start to finish.
wow that was very powerful..i loved it truly it was beautiful..~Love, Eva
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Whoa taht was BEAUTIFUL, passionate definitly intense and refreshing as the others said> its really deep coz it kind of reminds me of me! ! if you get wat i mean! ! ! 10/10 for sure.