Decadence... Poem by Sandra Feldman

Decadence...

Rating: 5.0


Going
Downhill
Very fast!
Not really
Having,
Quite
A blast,
With Deep
Incompetence,
Bad function
Comes
Destruction,
We may not
Last,
Empires crumble
S0, why not
US?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2022

Anything can happen at anytime with anyone. US is not an exception. Nice write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2022

A very keen observation expressed in powerful poetic expressions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2022

So true. So true. Deep incompetence will always compromise the future of a country and the lives of people. State of deterioration is always a feature of incompetence.

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Richard Wlodarski 07 June 2022

During such times, we poets must be a beacon to others. They expect it! And deserve it! And the US has always been a beacon! Excellent poem, Sandra!

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Sandra Feldman 07 June 2022

So true, so true and we are living it now! I appreciate your comment. Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 07 June 2022

So true, so true, and we are living it now. Thanks for reading, I appreciate your comment.

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