Dawn Poem by Phil J Hambling

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Crystal beads
Cling the blades of grass
Old water spirits
Weary of the night
Ripe in the knowledge
To drop is to die
For the birth of morning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The day-break captured in its entire beauty! Loved it

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Rob Lamberton 15 January 2023

Nosheen said it well! 5*****

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Nosheen Irfan 15 January 2023

A profound and delightful depiction of the morning. Top marks!

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Bruk Renwick 14 January 2023

The early morning is when I feel alive.

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