Dad Poem by Nikki Addleton

Dad



Sometimes i wonder why i bother
Im nothing to you anymore
I havent been for years
You dont even care
Why should you?
You left me behind
Closed the doors
Im sorry
Im not everything you hoped for
Im sorry
Im not everything you hoped id be
You were never proud of me
Maybe someday I'll make you proud
By just being me
I think ive done all that i can
So I'll never be apart of your life
And i wont let you into mine again

~nikki addleton~ 19/07/10

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Livengood 19 July 2010

yet again nikki, youve left me baffled. in your poem by the name ' dad ', try finding words that have more meaning to make the matter seem more important. because it is. am i right?

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Nikki Addleton

Nikki Addleton

county durham, united kingdom
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